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Automaton

I am built to go through motions.

(built organically, destruction tested
across dozens of millennia and more.

I contain within me networks
of indescribable complexity,

relays and feedback loops. They
equip me to monitor the world I survey,

analyse all that my receptors respond to,
and minimise the lag

between stimulus and gratification.
Bit and spur, they goad me toward

survival, piloted all the while
by subroutines of skill and guile.)

“I” is my guiding fiction. My sense of “me”
is the necessary fiction, written

into every cell. Those urgent messages
imply a “you” to recognise, another

that will appear to be as
self determined, as spontaneous, as me.
©2008-2009 =AlecBell
:iconalecbell:

Author's Comments

This is a poem of the moment, but it also confronts a theme that I've been pursuing in my reading of Richard Dawkins and Daniel Dennett.

The poetic method is loose, because this is a first approximation, though the poem itself is complete.

This is my September contribution to :iconelectrobaby:s Competition, A Year In The Making.

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:iconblueskye27:
I really like it. Great work.
:iconmarzguy:
Very different for you, theme wise. Looking forward rather than back.

It raises some great thought.

--
"I wonder what chickens would think
of fake bananas."

(Timmy Russell)
:iconnaaya-neko:
Aimi: I like it...but I don't quite get it. X___X
That doesn't make sense, does it? ^-^;;

--
I passed by the window, and marked with one eye,
How the owl and the panther were sharing a pie.
The panther took pie crust, gravy and meat,
While the owl took the dish as his share of the treat.

SharedAccount
:iconalecbell:
Thanks very much Cindy.

--
There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconalecbell:
Thanks very much, Mark.

You've probably noticed that this piece too relates to how the notion of freedom might be understood.

--
There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconalecbell:
Getting and and liking it don't always happen at the same time.

You can enjoy the sound patterns and images of a poem, without needing understand fully what the poem has to say?

--
There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconeffamay:
in terms of the vivid, fluid images, the part in brackets was brilliant - then following that, this bit particularly stood out for me as something special:

My sense of “me”
is the necessary fiction, written
into every cell


those lines show the talent in you that I envy.

--
Dum spiro spero.

"You can't deny laughter; when it comes, it plops down in your favorite chair and stays as long as it wants."
:iconalecbell:
Thank you very much Emma.

your comments are very generous, and very much appreciated.

--
There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]

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