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Bloody Sunday, St Petersburg

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The Emperor's retired to his country retreat
That crazy priest has chosen this day to present his humble petition
Close by the empty palace, Cossack horses stamp their feet
The soldiers watch the mob approach, faces masks of derision

That crazy priest has chosen this day to present his humble petition
The mob believe the absent Czar will welcome their all loyal hearts
The soldiers watch the mob approach, their faces masks of derision
The moment approaches, when corpses will be heaped on carts


The mob believe the absent Czar will welcome their all loyal hearts
Close by the empty palace, Cossack horses stamp their feet
The moment approaches, when corpses will be heaped on carts
The Emperor's retired to his country retreat.
Using the pantoum form again, to echo the horror that witnesses must have felt.

A poetic mimicry of the repetitions of post traumatic stress syndrome.

The full title includes the date 1905
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wyldhoney's avatar
Wow, a historical pantoum, that's quite an achievement! You make it work really well. :clap: