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(For Sirrah)

She is peering at the image displayed
on the camera’s screen. Her eye no longer
shackled by its nakedness, she easily believes
that the world made visible through
the macro lens is much too lush, too detailed
to be crushed within the cramped dimensions
                                                     of everyday.

The vision consumes her attention. She adjusts
the focus and the frame. Her very being prepares
for the climactic moment, when she will cause
this abundant, exotic flow of information to freeze,
fixed in immobility. Time has not been set on pause,
it streams around the image,
                                   motionless now, and unreal,
a moment's shell, severed by the shutter’s guillotine.

(A sliding raindrop
surrenders to gravity.
Motion’s born again.)
©2009 =AlecBell
:iconalecbell:

Author's Comments

This poem is dedicated to :iconandromedaii: She has allowed me to post it here.

When you visit her gallery you will see some excellent macro shots of flowers. These are the subject of the poem.

(For those who are interested, the poem is a haibun)

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:iconandromedaii:
:iconjoyplz: This is just beautiful, Alec. :excited::dance::hug::glomp: I LOVE it!!! It's such an honor...really so much so. I'm very overwhelmed with how you see me and my art...it's like getting an award. And it's sooo beautiful...so wonderful. :iconwowplz: :happycry: Thank you soooo much. :love:

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:heart: ~Sirrah
Your heart understands what your head cannot yet conceive; trust your heart. ~Unknown
:iconalecbell:
You're very welcome, Sirrah. I enjoy your pictures very much.

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconandromedaii:
Thanks so much...it's such a pleasure to know you enjoy them so. :)

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:heart: ~Sirrah
Your heart understands what your head cannot yet conceive; trust your heart. ~Unknown
:iconalecbell:
:heart:

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconmistakenmagic:
'severed by the shutter’s guillotine'

- wow what a line! Love it, my best friend is a photographer and I'm sure he would appreciate this - hope you don't mind if I show him it?

Erin xxx

--
A man discovered fire - but a woman discovered how to play with it.
:iconalecbell:
Please do, Erin. Thanks very much for your comment.

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconthetaoofchaos:
beautiful poem. and the flowers are incredible. thanks for the piece and the suggestion!

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The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us
:iconanavah:
Great form and subject matter! I love the following imagery:

a moment's shell, severed by the shutter’s guillotine.

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Thank you.
:iconalecbell:
Thank you very much.

--
There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]

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