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“Sincerity” just
didn’t hold her interest,
it climaxed too soon.

After the first syllable
no more fun. It's all down hill.
©2007-2009 =AlecBell
:iconalecbell:

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:iconw-uno:
Simple and effective. This one really stands out among your other work.

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Go then - there are other worlds than these.
:iconalecbell:
Thanks

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconmarzguy:
Nice word play...and it enhanced the message.

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Still, the whistle pig,
On Monday, bids adieu to his own kind.
:iconalecbell:
There s a rhetoric for suggestive jokes as well!!

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconalecbell:
Sorry, I attached your reply to the wrong comment. Technology keeps getting ahead of me.

I'm glad you liked it. I don't want people to forget that I cam do jokes!!!!!!!

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconalecbell:
:XD:

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconfrazzled-mage:
Oh look~ A format that is only slightly longer than a Haiku. :bounce: I had forgotten the tanka's layout :blush:. Shame on me!

Now to your loving spoonful of poetic tongue-in-cheek. I will not bludgeon the lovely double entendres you playfully set forth in this piece, but know that I love them. Tanka you wery much.

jfk

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please stop by sometime :gallery:

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:iconalecbell:
You are very welcome.

I'm happy to share a tanka with you any time!!

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]

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