If it shimmers
thats because both
light and surface
are imperfect.
This imperfections
highly wrought,
a craftsmans mystery
of hand and eye.
Youre tempted to hold it
but you know too easily
it could slip through
your fingers.
Or could it melt in your
over-ardent grasp?















Devious Comments
Comments
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post-script
mere words can
transcend meaning
(what you think, and write, and say).
haiku becomes
a mantra becomes
the pattern for your day.
-praytell
I read this in the morning. It's now 6pm, and after it teetering into my thoughts again, I thought it best to tell you that I enjoyed it, it was thought inducing, and its certainly fave worthy
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Dum spiro spero.
There is a sense in which for me the poet is the ultimate craftsman. That is not to exclude other layers of meaning, and certainly not to suggest that my reading takes priority.
The completed poem is a kite borne aloft on the breezes of comprehension. Let it be blown where it will!!
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There's always a better poem just out of reach.
Words create situations
The roots of the future run deep
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There's always a better poem just out of reach.
Words create situations
The roots of the future run deep
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There's always a better poem just out of reach.
Words create situations
The roots of the future run deep
Unlike with poetry, if I look at something I drew years ago, I'm usually utterly disgusted. XD
Anyway, uh, aw, man, it's too late to make any sense of this pitiful comment. U_U
Well, I might as well add in some praise then, you rock! 8D
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"I am never thrown out, and I don't leave quietly, I storm out! In a huff! And then I get revenge!"
-Serena
Thanks. I have occasionally tried to roll as well.
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There's always a better poem just out of reach.
Words create situations
The roots of the future run deep
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