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Motionless, the pool
has trapped the vault of heaven,
spread before my feet.

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Written as a Haiku commentary on Beyond The Surface by :iconink-in-amber:

She agreed to let me use her picture as a preview image. You see it full size here: [link]

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:iconmanwathiell:
Sorry, my friend is :icontrippy4u:

:hug:
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:iconmanwathiell:
Dear Alec:
I was linked here by a friend :icontrippy4you:. I live in S.America, my native language is Spanish and I didnīt know you. He told me you were a great poet...

I am so glad that I came to visit you... your writings touch my soul. So far I read and faved directly from the gallery and only now that I wanted to send you a comment I saw the pictures attached to each. I will have to review them all, to see if the picture I had in my head matches the one you selected.

Reading in English (literature, poems, stories) is not easy for me, because I usually have troubles understanding all the words. In your case and for whatever reason it might be, they are clear as daylight and they open their way to my heart in a beautiful way!

I will be delighted to read your whole gallery in the time to come... Your words are music for my soul...

:wave::heart:
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:iconalecbell:
I'm surprised and delighted that you are able to enjoy my poems, in spite of the language barrier.

Richard is indeed a valued friend of mine. I'm touched that he should have recommended me.
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:iconmanwathiell:
My English is pretty good, but not perfect. I use it mainly
here and for commercial purposes, so my literary vocabulary
is not very broad. My grandfather, who was born in England,
used to talk and sing songs to me in English... I simply love
this language!

Reading you is a new experience to me. You use the words as
a musician would use notes to compose music. The phrases flow
so soft and natural, one entangles the next like fairy hairs!

Richard is awesome. He always makes me laugh, over and over
again... he is such a gentleman!! We get along very well :aww:!

Let me thank you, too, for taking the time to visit my gallery.
It was a nice surprise. I know how busy you must be!
So gentle of you... :manhug:

Thanks for your kindness, dear Alec!

:aww:
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:iconalecbell:
fairy hairs!

The most amazing thing that anyone has said about my work! Thank you :heart:

Richard makes me laugh too, Aside from making those amazing pictures!
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:iconmanwathiell:
:nod: Yes... thatīs what came to my mind ...

I agree also about Richard... he has that special perception
needed to shoot at the right moment. Too sad that most people
donīt use the full view. Specially on his works, that is a must!

:aww:

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:iconprettycrazy:
~PrettyCrazy May 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Alec. In your case, I think sometimes there is absolutely no better poem just out of reach.
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:iconalecbell:
What a sweet and generous comment, An!

:blush: :blush:
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:iconprettycrazy:
~PrettyCrazy May 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
And every word of it so true!
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