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Moonlighting

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Our eyes always aspiring to see behind vision, as if
to discover what lies hidden beneath the flood of light.
Always we're trying to peer beyond the moon's bright cloak.
A commentary on Lua Cheia by =tigles1

The poem is in the English equivalent to the Korean Sijo. I have categorised the poem as Spiritual, thought you might choose to see it as romantic.

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Piscesandthediamonds
stunning...you took the very thoughts from my mind and expressed them much more better than i could have :heart: :D