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I can speak only
in regret's sad dialect,
and sing my losses.
©2009 =AlecBell
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:iconcrypticwritings:
i've been feeling this way all night, so i'm really feeling like i could hold the hand of this piece, and connect with it over coffee.

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yarnyarn nostrils
:iconprettycrazy:
Aww. A knife in the heart.

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And miles from where you are
I lay down on the cold ground
and I
I pray that something picks me up
and sets me down
in your warm arms...

Snow Patrol

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:iconalecbell:
Thank you, Rebecca, your comments are often sweetly unexpected!

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconalecbell:
But singing is better then weeping?

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconcrypticwritings:
You're very welcome! (:

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yarnyarn nostrils
:iconalecbell:
:heart:

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconleurindal:
yes - you capture the essence perfectly here :heart:

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"Beauty is truth, truth beauty," - that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.

J. Keats
:iconalecbell:
Thank you, Leonard.

You might think that there is some connection betwen what this Haiku says and the choice of tense in Dream

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconprettycrazy:
That I cannot deny.

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And miles from where you are
I lay down on the cold ground
and I
I pray that something picks me up
and sets me down
in your warm arms...

Snow Patrol

Search for enlightment at ~enlightened-poets.

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