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Tank Away, 8
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It might have happened,
the moment might have blossomed,
but you drew away.
Forgive me, but you beckoned
with eyes that needed too much.
the moment might have blossomed,
but you drew away.
Forgive me, but you beckoned
with eyes that needed too much.
A Tanka collaboration with my very dear friend *Blueskye27
I wrote the Haiku, Cindy wrote the couplet.
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I wrote the Haiku, Cindy wrote the couplet.
Should you decide to comment or fave, please visit
as well. Thank you. © 2010 - 2024 AlecBell
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mmmm, the couplet acknowledges fear, still gives a nod to the allure of overwhelming passion. a delicious combination!!! 