I jolt in waters;
a submarine the colour
of city Jodhpur.
Pale fish nuzzle and nibble,
Slowly the sea transforms me.
I jolt in waters; a submarine the colour of city Jodhpur. Pale fish nuzzle and nibble, Slowly the sea transforms me. |
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There's always a better poem just out of reach.
Words create situations [link]
The roots of the future run deep [link]
this is the best between you two to date.
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The world is an eraser for these words
- Jack Kerouac
we must destroy that which contains us
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There's always a better poem just out of reach.
Words create situations [link]
The roots of the future run deep [link]
but "jodhpur" (faintly) caught my eye.
my father (high-topped) wore a pair
fashion after Gable there.
memories seeming "gone with the wind"
drifting back upon water.
the more thought brought,
the better the writing must have been...
pip
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when a man refers to the woman,
[who chose him], as his better half,
for once, he tells the truth. - llp - nov'09
Another great pairing of words between poets.
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yarnyarn nostrils
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There's always a better poem just out of reach.
Words create situations [link]
The roots of the future run deep [link]
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There's always a better poem just out of reach.
Words create situations [link]
The roots of the future run deep [link]
made fashionable by Clark Gable, most
times sold in the colour later adopted
for hunting outfits and 'fisherman's waders'.
so both the watery blue and toasty gold are covered.
jodhpur pants are jolted by Jodhpur waters.
coincidence or intent?
pip
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when a man refers to the woman,
[who chose him], as his better half,
for once, he tells the truth. - llp - nov'09
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