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Vacant

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They have departed,
their intimacy dissolves,
leaving empty space.

They will celebrate nearness
in a more intimate place.
Commentary on Empty Space by *hailstorm13

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Peryllyve's avatar
It overflows with meaning and the reader has the freedom to engage in his/her own perception. And yet, the last line doesn't just close the story. It leaves room for more imagination. More essence in a handful of words.