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The Buddha’s features
pointlessly destroyed. Solid rock
blasted, fragmented.

Intolerance and hatred,
The ugly masks worn by fear.

His serenity
could never be embedded
in the sculpted stone.

His unbounded compassion
untroubled by  destruction.
©2008-2009 =AlecBell
:iconalecbell:

Author's Comments

This piece has been a slow burn. I made the first note for it a year ago.

I hesitated because I didn't want to write a rant. It finally seemed that the tanka provided the distance necessary to convey the enormity of the event, and the futility of the mind set that brought it about.

As for mature content, I hope my poem has more of that than the Taliban's act did.

03/09: A year after the first posting :icongrimeden: pointed out a flaw that neither I nor any other commenters had seen. It has now been rectified. I am very grateful fo his keen observation.

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:iconnaaya-neko:
Aimi: People are gonna be even more suspicious of you being Buddhist. XD
Oh you Buddhist, you!
:iconimhappyplz:

--
I passed by the window, and marked with one eye,
How the owl and the panther were sharing a pie.
The panther took pie crust, gravy and meat,
While the owl took the dish as his share of the treat.

SharedAccount
:iconblueskye27:
This is a wonderfully crafted, beautifully thought out work. The basic truth that god doesn't live in a stone and is thus unperturbed by said stone's destruction...brilliant.

I haven't studied tanka. Is it a set structure like haiku?
:iconalecbell:
Thank you for your very keen appreciation.

Tanka is haiku's older (and bigger) brother. It has two extra lines, both of which are supposed to contain seven syllables.

The haiku came into being when Basho, the most famous of Japan's traditional poets, dropped those last two lines. A long time ago.

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconblueskye27:
You're welcome; it's my pleasure.

I taught Basho in my World Lit class last summer. It was my first experience with him and thought he would probably be the only haiku most of my students would ever see... Thanks for explaining tanka to me.
:iconlifesizefairy:
Inflicting violence upon Buddha just gives more purpose to his teachings.

--
"We are inclined to believe those whom we do not know because they have never deceived us."
~Samuel Johnson
:iconalecbell:
I completely agree with you.

I also love your signature quote from the good Doctor. You can almost see the irony dripping

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There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconsatah:
Wonderful.

I'm not sure what else I can say to this.

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
:iconalecbell:
I'm sure you've said enough.

Thank you very much

--
There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconmarzguy:
The message supreme.

Thank you.

--
Whimsy and worry
Wonderfully plays.

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