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February 4, 2014
Wrong Place, Wrong Time by AlecBell
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Literature Text
There was a terrible event in the North-West of the city just days ago, in the small hours of last Sunday morning. The two girls were not drunk, but they were happy. They had spent an emotional evening celebrating the elder's birthday. They were on the main road, heading for a cab office nearby. They paid no heed to the dark sedan that was approaching them slowly.
The first thing anybody knew about what was going on, was when two deafening percussions assailed their ears. Immediately there was a mighty roar of acceleration. The sedan thundered into the night. The elder girl was prone on the sidewalk, her life blown away. You can imagine how a brief paralysis of shock gave way to a panicked bedlam, soon augmented by the converging klaxons of the first responders, medics, armed policemen.
As they woke, the city's sleeping denizens learned of this atrocity, and of the detective's first conclusion, that the dead girl was killed by “mistake”; those bullets were intended for another. Leave aside the first thought, that was was some anonymous woman out there in the city who was lucky to be alive. We cannot know if she had been nearby, if she had seen another felled by a destiny that was meant for her.
I struggle to capture the cosmic enormity of such an “accident”, which stained a sidewalk with innocent blood, bringing to an end a blameless world.
Look, she was on our hit-list. OK, we didn't get her, and now they're all muttering against me.
Nobody said, hey, it could happen to anyone. She was supposed to be there, it was all supposed to be smooth. I was worried that I was having to rely on an ancient weapon, unsilenced. Just one chance, then we had to be gone. We roared away up the main road, before we turned into one of the local estates where we had another waiting. We shunted the sedan into one of the deserted lock-up garages. We shifted ourselves into some kind of small, anonymous hatchback, and drove away like we were a bunch day-tripping pensioners.
We were still high on a job well done. No one had any inkling yet that we'd killed a dummy. You just don't that's all. Before anyone in the gang knew it, our shadow world was flooded with light We had done the job just right “drive by bye bye”. Everything right, except the target.
We just made targets of ourselves.
The first thing anybody knew about what was going on, was when two deafening percussions assailed their ears. Immediately there was a mighty roar of acceleration. The sedan thundered into the night. The elder girl was prone on the sidewalk, her life blown away. You can imagine how a brief paralysis of shock gave way to a panicked bedlam, soon augmented by the converging klaxons of the first responders, medics, armed policemen.
As they woke, the city's sleeping denizens learned of this atrocity, and of the detective's first conclusion, that the dead girl was killed by “mistake”; those bullets were intended for another. Leave aside the first thought, that was was some anonymous woman out there in the city who was lucky to be alive. We cannot know if she had been nearby, if she had seen another felled by a destiny that was meant for her.
I struggle to capture the cosmic enormity of such an “accident”, which stained a sidewalk with innocent blood, bringing to an end a blameless world.
Look, she was on our hit-list. OK, we didn't get her, and now they're all muttering against me.
Nobody said, hey, it could happen to anyone. She was supposed to be there, it was all supposed to be smooth. I was worried that I was having to rely on an ancient weapon, unsilenced. Just one chance, then we had to be gone. We roared away up the main road, before we turned into one of the local estates where we had another waiting. We shunted the sedan into one of the deserted lock-up garages. We shifted ourselves into some kind of small, anonymous hatchback, and drove away like we were a bunch day-tripping pensioners.
We were still high on a job well done. No one had any inkling yet that we'd killed a dummy. You just don't that's all. Before anyone in the gang knew it, our shadow world was flooded with light We had done the job just right “drive by bye bye”. Everything right, except the target.
We just made targets of ourselves.
Literature
On preparing to never let go
Walking slowly down the hall, arms filled with the day's mail, we spoke of morbid things.
She wants to be reduced to ash and I want to know if I can keep her on my mantle.
She looks at me sideways with a curious face and forgets her footsteps.
It's a little bit morbid, she tells me, deciding it's time to continue shuffling along,
but I think the way I'm trying to picture her perfect urn is probably worse.
There's nothing that I can think of that suits her, though,
and I wonder if I even know her.
Do I scatter you somewhere? You can't visit scatter.
(I think good daughters plant guilt in the carpet pile to trip upon.)
But she doesn't trip,
Literature
They say the one who prays
They say the one who prays receives much more
than whom we pray for, shaping what we want
to what we get. We find a way to pour
the outcomes into candle molds we can't
have fashioned for ourselves. But then we light
the wax and sniff the scent and call us blessed
by blessings in disguise. For what is right
in contexts so complex we cannot test?
For those who say that praying contradicts
free will or undercuts the will to change
injustice, fine. You have no wax, no wicks,
no blessing and no curse, you are the sage.
I pray to sculpt the candle and the mold
and scent with pity earth and heaven's hold.
Literature
Blood From a Far Off Place
Quiver full of bullet tipped arrows.
The bow of aluminum my dad made in high school.
I step into the sunlight on the south side of the house.
I'm 12.
I don't know why I pull the bowstring
back to my eye, aim upward, and loose.
Straight above my head.
And the voice said,
"You are a most common creature,
though of a peculiar people."
The Sun glints off the arrow's shaft.
I shade my eyes and wonder how long
before the arrow hits me. How long before
I step aside. How long to decipher a riddle
from a lipless voice.
Now I'm 16.
These days, I fire two arrows above my head.
Wondering. Hoping.
Bring back that voice.
One arrow. Two seconds la
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